starts with arjun asking radhika too look into his eyes and speak,after much hesitation radhika look into his eyes,,,she s completely lost in his eyes….they share eyelock….radhika pushes him and run from there and collides with neil.
Neil: wat u doing,
rads:sorry
neil: its ok
neil tries to ask something,radhika turns and see arjun is coming and runs from there…..neil is confused….arjun comes and take neil wih him…
Its time for dance practice,radhika s practicing dance alone in green room,arjun hides and enjoy every moment of rads….he comes and tells her that u hav to practice more…….u vll b coming with me to my home for practice….
Radhika gets shocked….and ask y i have to come to ur home…v can practice hereitself na…..
Arjun: tody s saturdy,clg will b closed,so we cant practice here,u have more to learn….so better come with me
radhika denies and says no, i wont come,i vll practice in hostel and leaves t room
scene2
Radhika s n library,she thinks how to escape from arjun,she gets idea and says…today i will go after all students leave….till then i will wait here…
Aft clg hrs,rads is waiting for t students to leave,once they leave,radhika starts to walk and see arjun waiting in his car….radhika gets shocked.
Arjun get down from his car and starts to walk toward her….
Arjun:shall v go…babe
rads;no,i wont come and start to leave
scene3
rads starts to leave bt arjun holda her hand and pulls her into his arm
arjun: u cant escape…ur coming with me right nw…babe.
Rads try to go,arjun lifts her up inhis arm and put her into car..she pleads with him to leave her,bt arjun drives off his car…arjun and radhika reach arjuns farmhouse…
Hey guys I am new here, not exactly , I am silent reader of all you guys, I read telly updates of mmz regularly.
read and like all the stories updates .
We are bonded over manmarziyan . Doesn’t know you all in real. but somehow feels connected with you all.
Amazing stories written by you all, Love your comments on also telly updates Kfar , deepa,anu , ananya, renu samiha,riya,
And really love the comments of you all.
Mandy,samiha,kfar,deepa,anu ,ananya,.sorry if i forgot the name but love you all.
Please comment here or can’tbe able to join google+ community.
Please tell us where else all you share your thoughts, stories?????????????????????????
And also I will try to find you all in myeduniya manmarziyan there also nobody there, BJGPH telly update page is also closed .
Miss your comments all Please somebody answer my query
@deepa- mindblowing dear.ardhika’s romance reach on extreme level yarrr 🙂 ;-). your story reminding me one of my favorite serial mile jab hum tum. Now waiting for alpha college dance competition. ..plzz post it soon buddy. ♡♡♥
keep calm and read manmarziyan’s update 😉 😉
@kfar – usually awesome episode. interesting to knows about arjun’s father storyline … luv your story keep going on !!!! and thnx for updating here.
anaya, thena, natasha, anu come on dear too much waiting for your written episodes …
Hi guys, it’s me, Samiha from TU. How are you all??? I found this page today and read all your comments…
@kfar: Thanks for updating here. Wanna know more about Arjun. Keep rocking…
@Deepa: I am so happy to see you here. I always read your stories and was missing them. Thanks for updating, keep it up…
@Izzy Girl: Wow, thanks a lot for updating the written episodes omce again… Keep it up…
@all other TU friends: Where are you guys??? Missing your stories (Anaya,Tanya, Anu, Thena, Natasha, Savera)…. And come soon dearies, missing you a lot…
Radz finished hr speech gvng a slogan “DON’T GUESS BUT DO GUESS”,carryin she, a persistent grin al over…..sudden then, the air filled wid blaster of claps……sam ws smiling broadly at piyali,hr body quivered on clappin……neil signaled thumbs up, starin proud at chasni & Arjun,ah! he fell emotional….. hs clap, a stealthily one & hs lips stickin 2gether conceited……
“well, good one”,priya gestured radz 2 take seat……Arjun’s gaze sauntered wid radz & halted bside hm as she b seated thr….. priya mehra stood up erected 2 gather attention & started gvng hr speech…..radz ws flabbergasted as she felt the heat of arjun’s palm penetratin hr thigh……he didn’t digress hs head, listenin 2 priya’s discourse wen she glanced at hm…..wid a blushin smile,she concealed hs hand in2 hrs, hr gaze too restrictin 2 priya……the clock rounded,the faces thr holdin a grimmin lips as the quietude had been tearin by priya mehra’s clipped tones……
“And Mrs.Radhika Mehra…..u.r.a.GENIUS”,priya concluded hr speech throwin a stern stare on radz……the air again filled wid applause,arjun’s fingers slid in2 hs wifey’s, clenchin tight in2 the gaps……
“xcuse me sir….may I come in?”, radz lips stretched 4m ear 2 ear peepin in2 arjun’s cabin……..
“yes, come in Radhika Mehra”,arjun’s sharp tone echoed on the room……
Clenching hs fingers 2 the gaps,he swiveled in hs chair……..hs wild stare fell fixed on hr getting in……
”did I ask u 2 sit?”,the utterance gave hr a giggle wen she ws about 2 settle oppo…..he bantered hr if she 4got he ws hr boss……
“whoa….whoa Arjun….”
”am ur boss here…just keep quiet & obey my order….”,she ws cut in the midst by hm…..
“now take ur seat”, hs bossy tone ws lil anomalous 2 hr…..
”did I ask u 2 sit thr?”,hr legs wobbled on hs sudden firm tone wen again she ws 2 settle.….
he, still in the same posture,ly a movement seen on lips, called hr near hm…….she tightened hr face 2 hr cheek bone angles turn in2 cutters…..
”yes sir”,she, near hm, uttered as if she ws getting a command 4m colonel……
”I asked u 2 take ur seat baby”,Arjun tugged hr 2 hs thighs…..
hr back hit hard on hs chest,hr hair strands covered hs face…..she elbowed hm & wriggled btw hs arms bt he held hr firmly…….he pursed hs mouth & hot air ws blown bhind hr ear…….hr body lost its grip,eyes closed as hr head dropped back on hs chest…….he closed hs eyes,hs arms wer wrapped around hr neck & hs cheek ws perched on hrs……
Sam kept twirlin her head & slid hr hand in2 hr jean pocket 2 take out the beepin mobile…….’don’t miss me baby….i’ll b soon thr’,the message read…..’hahaha….good joke idiot….y shud i miss u?’,replied she…….she approached zubin & asked hm neil’s whereabouts….immediately then she turned back jumpin,hr hands coverin hr face as neil peeped out 4m zubin’s cabin…..she just rushed out 4m thr followed by neil…..
SCENE 2:
Nandhini called the gangster,asked hm if everythin ws gng well…..she warned hm 2 xecute the plan clean as no1 shud b strayed 2wards them…..hr tone ws wild,face ws as terrible as a witch……she ended the call,turned 2 c saral standin thr……”wat r u dng here?”,shouted she….”money”,he uttered wid a smirk,hs hands wer in2 hs pant pockets…….annoyed she ws,slid hr fingers in2 hr purse & xtended hm the money……
It ws a lonely street,the trees wer blockin the moonlight 2 reach its ground…….a group of bulkies stood waitin under the tree……a man ws shown approachin them…….he hand over samy’s photo 2 them,ws shown instructin something serious,hs index finger kept movin to & fro…..
SCENE 3:
Sam sittin in bed kept callin neil’s number…..she ws restless,dispatched hr gaze 2 the clock….it ws 11.30…..panicked she ws,as neil went out sayin tat he wud soon b home…..hr heart skipped hr as the lights went down in sudden……..hr heart beat echoed 2 hr……she gulped hard as the room’s the door rumbled quivering…..she stepped out the bed,very sedate hr move 2 the door ws……
no1 ws thr outside…..she threw hr gaze 2 r8 & left,hr body had a lil arc 4ward,……she went aside & called neil’s mobile again,nippin hr lower lip in perturbation…..sweat drops peeped out hr 4head….she got annoyed cudn’t reach hs numberAgain she threw hr gaze 2 r8 & left & went in……she screamed…..Oh! someone grasped hr shoulder as hr legs wer 2 cross the threshold…..hr mouth ws closed tight leavin hr 2 xpel out air in despair…..
I hv been following all ur stories kfar, anaya and also others writing their versions of manmarziyan (renu, tanya, deepa, anu, natasha and others) in TU., all ur stories r awesome.. hope u guys will post ur updates hr 🙂 cheers
Hi, guys, it’s me, Farha again, I’m gonna post my story here as I have nowhere else to go…
Drawn Together
Arjun was harsh and ruthless when in came to business. He became cold and rough as granite from years of hard work and struggles. Fifteen years ago when his father went bankrupt, Arjun had to take care of the dwindling business at a very young age. Every so called friend of hus father closed their doors on his face when he tried to ask help. His business associates who survived the inflation and the industrial drought, those friends laighed and sneered at the young vulnerable businessm Theze would eat alive emotions. One slip of expression from the iron clad will and it becomes the weopen of the enemies.
His fatjer did not survive the fall. He became bankrupt and alcohlic overnight. He died two years late. His mother passed away when he was very young. After his father’s dead there was nothing that could bring him down to vulnerabilty. He felt empowered and climbed up the ladder becoming more closed off with emotions and feelings.
And, now, the people who jeered his efforts years ago were reluctantly eating out of his habd. The dropped heads in shame brought his bruised vitiated ego and revenge hungry soul little but some repast. He was regarded with respect as he raked a deep sense of fear in their minds after year after of great heights of success in the busibess world. He now had large chain of VIP restaurants and hotels across the country and all over most of the world.
He worked hard yet he did not party hard. The only break he gets was from these functions, which only brought him little momentary peace.
An hour later it was becoming grinding on his nerves. Finally, he left after countless clicking of cameras with the future bride and groom and their relatives and so on. He should have charged another million, that way there will be no invites in the near future, he thought in frustrated anger.
Chapter-2
“What’s the update on the land?” Arjun asked his secretary.
Karthik looked up from his laptop and stared at his boss. Yes, his secretary was a guy. Men were much more reliable than women. He didn’t like a wan secretary as there was a chance of mix and shit, and he didn’t want that. Business should be strictly business and nothing on the sides.
“There hadn’t been any information about it for too long but, apparently, there has been an activity, Sir.” He said in a flat tone.
Arjun who was looking put from his large glass window swirled around his chair. His posture got stiff as his face pinched up in astute concentration.
“What activity?” He asked, his heart beat rapidly in his chest.
Karthik looked up surprised from his laptop. He had never sensed anxiousness in the boss’s voice ever. This was the first time his curiosity was peaked, otherwise he was always calm and confident.
He cleared his throat.
“The land had just been transfered under…” He clicked on the list he got from hislinks.
“Yes.” Arjun waited with baited breath.
“It’s tranferred under one of the daughters of Mr. Raghav Mishra.” He said with a frown marring his forehead.
Arjun’s eyes turned cold as he gritted his teeth. Damn. Raghav Mishra was the cunning fox of the advertisement world, and his business dealth with most corrupt deals. He was the malicipus bastard. How did he get his filthy bloody hands on his father’s dream land?
Arjun’s father had lost everuthing investing on that land. He wasnted to establish a school for underprivileged children. With no expense spared, but right at that moment his company got ibto sudden debt with the debaclin the market and inflation.
He lost his land . His company. Every single dime.
starts with radhika siting alone in class….arjun comes there and closes the door and start to walk to her he comes and sit close to her,he looks at her,cups her face and placed veryhot kiss on her lips….leaving radhika to shout….tats when she realised it was her ni8 dream,tittu ask wt hpend? Radhika: nothing
Tittu give her some water and ask her to sleep.radhika goes to sleep….tittu s left thinking
next day,,,in college arjun s waiting for radhika in green room,some one opens the door,and arjun happily turns to c her,bt his happiness shade whe he see tittu there
arjun:wat ru doing here,go n send ur friend,its already late
tittu: radhika s on leave today
arjun: y,wt happened?
Tittu: nothing serious,she told she want to tak rest,
arjun: oh,thanks for informing,u may leave now
tittu goes,arjun becomes very sad,he thinks abt radhika and get restless
there radhika feel like someone is thinking abt her and gets restless.both of them reminses the time they spend together.
Scene2
At ni8,arjun is playing pool,neil comes and joins him,
neil: arjun….wt do u think abt love
arjun: thinks of radhika,and their moment,and start to explain
neil: hey…dude i asked generally,bt u have linked everything with radhika
arjun gets shocked
neil: have u fallen in love with her
arjun: smiles in his heart and tells no,i dont love any1 and dont need any1 and goes out
neil: arjun…ur eyes itself says that u need her terribly and u want to achieve her
neil thinks how to make them closer.
Scene3
Next day,in clg,radhika is going to staffroom,someone pulls her inside empty room,she s shocked to c arjun.arjun ask her y u din come yesterday.radhika is busy staring at him,she thinks that she should control her feelings and tells him hardly tat s none of his business…and tries to go…arjun stops her,carasses her face and touches her lip with his finger,radhika is lost by his touch,,,and looks down….ajun lifts her chin and ask her to c his eyes and answer…radhika gets tensed
precap
arjun lifts radhika in his arm and put her in his car…
Hey every option is closed guys on TU…should I update here the story?
Hi, thanks Kruti sure I will 😀
Deepa wer r our friends all?!?
thena, mandy, ireena,dipika, anu, renu, shub,anaya, tanya, ure, clara,zara,tasnim, savera, strawberry, seher,kanishka samiha, happy,abi, mitty, and all guys….shub i cant find the community in google+ yaar sab kahan par ho
starts with radhika in classroom,lost in thoughtd,tittu s talking with misha “something is wrong with radhika….she s totally confused…..Misha: i too think t same…bcos i never saw her in this condition
tittu:lets find out
rocky comes there and inform them to come for computer class,as their chemistry mam s on leave today….
Tittu:hey jolly,v can bunk…
Rocky tells u cant bunk….attendance s compulsory….in case u bunk,ur internal mark will not b given….so dont wait ur time,come fast
all 1st yr enters t class,arjun s talking with neil….rads enters in and arjun fix his gaze on her,neil noticing arjun staring at radhika
radhika feels as if someone s touching her body by eyes and she sees arjun…
Scene2
radhika s seated behind arjun showing her back to him…arjun s completely lost by her presence,neil is seen noticing this.
Arjun stares her romantically,radhika feels his hot breath on her back and feels uncomfy class s going on both were lost in their own thoughts….class getover,they all leave.
Scene3
incanteen,tittu and misha are discussing abt ardhika,they plan something inorder to knw radhikas feeling
radhika s alone in class,thinking,y she is getting attracted to him very much,i hav to control my mind,i hav to concentrate on studies and nothingelse….i hav to stayaway from him,so that i wont get weird thoughts
Hi kfar…I hv been following ur story Drawn together in tellyupdates.. Ur writing skills r amazing.. Waiting eagerly for more updates. Do let us know as to wr u will post the story
Strawberry u might not know me i know u on tu can u ask kfar deepa
And oters to continue their mmz story hete through mail tu team my invitation msg there pls plspls
Strawberry u might not know me i know u on tu can u ask kfar deepa
And others to continue their mmz story here through mail tu team rejected my invitation msg there pls plspls
675 Comments
nisha
September 14, 06:50guys, please update the story, kfar , deepa,
anu, and ananya really loving your stories. Nice stories you started.
So many stories started in telly update page but now as the page is finished there , the stories are behind with incomplete end.
ananya story with arjun and radhika in hospital.
anu story after radhika and arjun marriage.
and soon. :):):):):):)
Hope you all, join here and start updating your stories here .
Love you all.
Clara
September 14, 06:16Hey my TU friends!! I can’t get the comment box in the BGPH page in TU…Is it the same with you all??
nisha
September 14, 06:27yes, clara, I also try to check the comments and update but doesn’t succeed.
seher
September 14, 06:42yup….clara evn i found it closd….
Samiha
September 14, 06:47Yeah, the page is still there but the comment box isn’t. The page has been deactivated. But we can still chat here thankfully…
Clara
September 14, 10:09Okay!! Thanks everyone.
deepa
September 14, 05:54Epi 15
starts with arjun asking radhika too look into his eyes and speak,after much hesitation radhika look into his eyes,,,she s completely lost in his eyes….they share eyelock….radhika pushes him and run from there and collides with neil.
Neil: wat u doing,
rads:sorry
neil: its ok
neil tries to ask something,radhika turns and see arjun is coming and runs from there…..neil is confused….arjun comes and take neil wih him…
Its time for dance practice,radhika s practicing dance alone in green room,arjun hides and enjoy every moment of rads….he comes and tells her that u hav to practice more…….u vll b coming with me to my home for practice….
Radhika gets shocked….and ask y i have to come to ur home…v can practice hereitself na…..
Arjun: tody s saturdy,clg will b closed,so we cant practice here,u have more to learn….so better come with me
radhika denies and says no, i wont come,i vll practice in hostel and leaves t room
scene2
Radhika s n library,she thinks how to escape from arjun,she gets idea and says…today i will go after all students leave….till then i will wait here…
Aft clg hrs,rads is waiting for t students to leave,once they leave,radhika starts to walk and see arjun waiting in his car….radhika gets shocked.
Arjun get down from his car and starts to walk toward her….
Arjun:shall v go…babe
rads;no,i wont come and start to leave
scene3
rads starts to leave bt arjun holda her hand and pulls her into his arm
arjun: u cant escape…ur coming with me right nw…babe.
Rads try to go,arjun lifts her up inhis arm and put her into car..she pleads with him to leave her,bt arjun drives off his car…arjun and radhika reach arjuns farmhouse…
Precap:
arjun puts radhika in bed and removes his shirt….
Clara
September 14, 06:10Nice 🙂
And please update the 16th episode soon.
P.S.Loving your story.
unknown
September 14, 06:11Good one deepa
seher
September 14, 06:40wow…eagerly waitng for 16th epi… <3
seher
September 14, 05:49nce epi farah….thnx fo d update… 🙂
nisha
September 14, 06:01Hey guys I am new here, not exactly , I am silent reader of all you guys, I read telly updates of mmz regularly.
read and like all the stories updates .
We are bonded over manmarziyan . Doesn’t know you all in real. but somehow feels connected with you all.
Amazing stories written by you all, Love your comments on also telly updates Kfar , deepa,anu , ananya, renu samiha,riya,
And really love the comments of you all.
Mandy,samiha,kfar,deepa,anu ,ananya,.sorry if i forgot the name but love you all.
Please comment here or can’tbe able to join google+ community.
Please tell us where else all you share your thoughts, stories?????????????????????????
And also I will try to find you all in myeduniya manmarziyan there also nobody there, BJGPH telly update page is also closed .
Miss your comments all Please somebody answer my query
zara
September 14, 05:45@deepa- mindblowing dear.ardhika’s romance reach on extreme level yarrr 🙂 ;-). your story reminding me one of my favorite serial mile jab hum tum. Now waiting for alpha college dance competition. ..plzz post it soon buddy. ♡♡♥
keep calm and read manmarziyan’s update 😉 😉
@kfar – usually awesome episode. interesting to knows about arjun’s father storyline … luv your story keep going on !!!! and thnx for updating here.
anaya, thena, natasha, anu come on dear too much waiting for your written episodes …
Natasha
September 14, 07:19Really! My favorite serial is also miley jab hum tum.
Strawberry
September 14, 05:10Thena??? Where r u…update plzzz
kanishka
September 14, 05:02Thanks a lot azaz
unknown
September 14, 04:58Kfar and deepa i am waiting for ur update u bothe are amazing writers
strawberry
September 14, 05:00Did u use the same name in tu also???
unknown
September 14, 06:07Ya strawberry i am the same unknown from tu 🙂
Natasha
September 14, 04:50Oh so u all r there guys? I was missing u all. Sorry as i couldnt talk to u in the last day at telly updates due to my personal work.
Samiha
September 14, 06:04Hi, Natasha! Glad you are here…
Samiha
September 14, 03:48Hi guys, it’s me, Samiha from TU. How are you all??? I found this page today and read all your comments…
@kfar: Thanks for updating here. Wanna know more about Arjun. Keep rocking…
@Deepa: I am so happy to see you here. I always read your stories and was missing them. Thanks for updating, keep it up…
@Izzy Girl: Wow, thanks a lot for updating the written episodes omce again… Keep it up…
@all other TU friends: Where are you guys??? Missing your stories (Anaya,Tanya, Anu, Thena, Natasha, Savera)…. And come soon dearies, missing you a lot…
nisha
September 14, 04:41Hey guys, I am a silent reader of mmz. I read all your stories comments.
Mandy,samiha,kfar,deepa,anu ,ananya,.
Please comment here or can’tbe able to join google+ community.
Please tell us where else all you share your thoughts, stories?????????????????????????
And also I will try to find you all in myeduniya manmarziyan there also nobody there, BJGPH telly update page is also closed .
Miss your comments all Please somebody answer my query
strawberry
September 14, 04:49I don’t think u know me…..but I know u…….I’m strawberry
strawberry
September 14, 03:37Thena plzz come here…
Thena
September 14, 02:11EPISODE 135:
SCENE 1:
Radz finished hr speech gvng a slogan “DON’T GUESS BUT DO GUESS”,carryin she, a persistent grin al over…..sudden then, the air filled wid blaster of claps……sam ws smiling broadly at piyali,hr body quivered on clappin……neil signaled thumbs up, starin proud at chasni & Arjun,ah! he fell emotional….. hs clap, a stealthily one & hs lips stickin 2gether conceited……
“well, good one”,priya gestured radz 2 take seat……Arjun’s gaze sauntered wid radz & halted bside hm as she b seated thr….. priya mehra stood up erected 2 gather attention & started gvng hr speech…..radz ws flabbergasted as she felt the heat of arjun’s palm penetratin hr thigh……he didn’t digress hs head, listenin 2 priya’s discourse wen she glanced at hm…..wid a blushin smile,she concealed hs hand in2 hrs, hr gaze too restrictin 2 priya……the clock rounded,the faces thr holdin a grimmin lips as the quietude had been tearin by priya mehra’s clipped tones……
“And Mrs.Radhika Mehra…..u.r.a.GENIUS”,priya concluded hr speech throwin a stern stare on radz……the air again filled wid applause,arjun’s fingers slid in2 hs wifey’s, clenchin tight in2 the gaps……
“xcuse me sir….may I come in?”, radz lips stretched 4m ear 2 ear peepin in2 arjun’s cabin……..
“yes, come in Radhika Mehra”,arjun’s sharp tone echoed on the room……
Clenching hs fingers 2 the gaps,he swiveled in hs chair……..hs wild stare fell fixed on hr getting in……
”did I ask u 2 sit?”,the utterance gave hr a giggle wen she ws about 2 settle oppo…..he bantered hr if she 4got he ws hr boss……
“whoa….whoa Arjun….”
”am ur boss here…just keep quiet & obey my order….”,she ws cut in the midst by hm…..
“now take ur seat”, hs bossy tone ws lil anomalous 2 hr…..
”did I ask u 2 sit thr?”,hr legs wobbled on hs sudden firm tone wen again she ws 2 settle.….
he, still in the same posture,ly a movement seen on lips, called hr near hm…….she tightened hr face 2 hr cheek bone angles turn in2 cutters…..
”yes sir”,she, near hm, uttered as if she ws getting a command 4m colonel……
”I asked u 2 take ur seat baby”,Arjun tugged hr 2 hs thighs…..
hr back hit hard on hs chest,hr hair strands covered hs face…..she elbowed hm & wriggled btw hs arms bt he held hr firmly…….he pursed hs mouth & hot air ws blown bhind hr ear…….hr body lost its grip,eyes closed as hr head dropped back on hs chest…….he closed hs eyes,hs arms wer wrapped around hr neck & hs cheek ws perched on hrs……
Sam kept twirlin her head & slid hr hand in2 hr jean pocket 2 take out the beepin mobile…….’don’t miss me baby….i’ll b soon thr’,the message read…..’hahaha….good joke idiot….y shud i miss u?’,replied she…….she approached zubin & asked hm neil’s whereabouts….immediately then she turned back jumpin,hr hands coverin hr face as neil peeped out 4m zubin’s cabin…..she just rushed out 4m thr followed by neil…..
SCENE 2:
Nandhini called the gangster,asked hm if everythin ws gng well…..she warned hm 2 xecute the plan clean as no1 shud b strayed 2wards them…..hr tone ws wild,face ws as terrible as a witch……she ended the call,turned 2 c saral standin thr……”wat r u dng here?”,shouted she….”money”,he uttered wid a smirk,hs hands wer in2 hs pant pockets…….annoyed she ws,slid hr fingers in2 hr purse & xtended hm the money……
It ws a lonely street,the trees wer blockin the moonlight 2 reach its ground…….a group of bulkies stood waitin under the tree……a man ws shown approachin them…….he hand over samy’s photo 2 them,ws shown instructin something serious,hs index finger kept movin to & fro…..
SCENE 3:
Sam sittin in bed kept callin neil’s number…..she ws restless,dispatched hr gaze 2 the clock….it ws 11.30…..panicked she ws,as neil went out sayin tat he wud soon b home…..hr heart skipped hr as the lights went down in sudden……..hr heart beat echoed 2 hr……she gulped hard as the room’s the door rumbled quivering…..she stepped out the bed,very sedate hr move 2 the door ws……
no1 ws thr outside…..she threw hr gaze 2 r8 & left,hr body had a lil arc 4ward,……she went aside & called neil’s mobile again,nippin hr lower lip in perturbation…..sweat drops peeped out hr 4head….she got annoyed cudn’t reach hs numberAgain she threw hr gaze 2 r8 & left & went in……she screamed…..Oh! someone grasped hr shoulder as hr legs wer 2 cross the threshold…..hr mouth ws closed tight leavin hr 2 xpel out air in despair…..
END of epi 135…..
Kruti
September 14, 00:12I hv been following all ur stories kfar, anaya and also others writing their versions of manmarziyan (renu, tanya, deepa, anu, natasha and others) in TU., all ur stories r awesome.. hope u guys will post ur updates hr 🙂 cheers
Anaya
September 14, 05:01Thank you yaar…. I just read Farha’s comment in bd and came over.
kfar
September 13, 14:14Hi, guys, it’s me, Farha again, I’m gonna post my story here as I have nowhere else to go…
Drawn Together
Arjun was harsh and ruthless when in came to business. He became cold and rough as granite from years of hard work and struggles. Fifteen years ago when his father went bankrupt, Arjun had to take care of the dwindling business at a very young age. Every so called friend of hus father closed their doors on his face when he tried to ask help. His business associates who survived the inflation and the industrial drought, those friends laighed and sneered at the young vulnerable businessm Theze would eat alive emotions. One slip of expression from the iron clad will and it becomes the weopen of the enemies.
His fatjer did not survive the fall. He became bankrupt and alcohlic overnight. He died two years late. His mother passed away when he was very young. After his father’s dead there was nothing that could bring him down to vulnerabilty. He felt empowered and climbed up the ladder becoming more closed off with emotions and feelings.
And, now, the people who jeered his efforts years ago were reluctantly eating out of his habd. The dropped heads in shame brought his bruised vitiated ego and revenge hungry soul little but some repast. He was regarded with respect as he raked a deep sense of fear in their minds after year after of great heights of success in the busibess world. He now had large chain of VIP restaurants and hotels across the country and all over most of the world.
He worked hard yet he did not party hard. The only break he gets was from these functions, which only brought him little momentary peace.
An hour later it was becoming grinding on his nerves. Finally, he left after countless clicking of cameras with the future bride and groom and their relatives and so on. He should have charged another million, that way there will be no invites in the near future, he thought in frustrated anger.
Chapter-2
“What’s the update on the land?” Arjun asked his secretary.
Karthik looked up from his laptop and stared at his boss. Yes, his secretary was a guy. Men were much more reliable than women. He didn’t like a wan secretary as there was a chance of mix and shit, and he didn’t want that. Business should be strictly business and nothing on the sides.
“There hadn’t been any information about it for too long but, apparently, there has been an activity, Sir.” He said in a flat tone.
Arjun who was looking put from his large glass window swirled around his chair. His posture got stiff as his face pinched up in astute concentration.
“What activity?” He asked, his heart beat rapidly in his chest.
Karthik looked up surprised from his laptop. He had never sensed anxiousness in the boss’s voice ever. This was the first time his curiosity was peaked, otherwise he was always calm and confident.
He cleared his throat.
“The land had just been transfered under…” He clicked on the list he got from hislinks.
“Yes.” Arjun waited with baited breath.
“It’s tranferred under one of the daughters of Mr. Raghav Mishra.” He said with a frown marring his forehead.
Arjun’s eyes turned cold as he gritted his teeth. Damn. Raghav Mishra was the cunning fox of the advertisement world, and his business dealth with most corrupt deals. He was the malicipus bastard. How did he get his filthy bloody hands on his father’s dream land?
Arjun’s father had lost everuthing investing on that land. He wasnted to establish a school for underprivileged children. With no expense spared, but right at that moment his company got ibto sudden debt with the debaclin the market and inflation.
He lost his land . His company. Every single dime.
Kruti
September 13, 14:28Hey ur writing skills are amazing…
deepa
September 13, 14:38Farha…go ahead yaar…am dying to knw more abt arjun yaar….
Annie
September 14, 05:00Farah I think I missed something which was the last part you posted before this
Clara
September 14, 06:06Amazing description of Arjun!! 🙂
Waiting for your next update.
deepa
September 13, 11:46Epi 14
starts with radhika siting alone in class….arjun comes there and closes the door and start to walk to her he comes and sit close to her,he looks at her,cups her face and placed veryhot kiss on her lips….leaving radhika to shout….tats when she realised it was her ni8 dream,tittu ask wt hpend? Radhika: nothing
Tittu give her some water and ask her to sleep.radhika goes to sleep….tittu s left thinking
next day,,,in college arjun s waiting for radhika in green room,some one opens the door,and arjun happily turns to c her,bt his happiness shade whe he see tittu there
arjun:wat ru doing here,go n send ur friend,its already late
tittu: radhika s on leave today
arjun: y,wt happened?
Tittu: nothing serious,she told she want to tak rest,
arjun: oh,thanks for informing,u may leave now
tittu goes,arjun becomes very sad,he thinks abt radhika and get restless
there radhika feel like someone is thinking abt her and gets restless.both of them reminses the time they spend together.
Scene2
At ni8,arjun is playing pool,neil comes and joins him,
neil: arjun….wt do u think abt love
arjun: thinks of radhika,and their moment,and start to explain
neil: hey…dude i asked generally,bt u have linked everything with radhika
arjun gets shocked
neil: have u fallen in love with her
arjun: smiles in his heart and tells no,i dont love any1 and dont need any1 and goes out
neil: arjun…ur eyes itself says that u need her terribly and u want to achieve her
neil thinks how to make them closer.
Scene3
Next day,in clg,radhika is going to staffroom,someone pulls her inside empty room,she s shocked to c arjun.arjun ask her y u din come yesterday.radhika is busy staring at him,she thinks that she should control her feelings and tells him hardly tat s none of his business…and tries to go…arjun stops her,carasses her face and touches her lip with his finger,radhika is lost by his touch,,,and looks down….ajun lifts her chin and ask her to c his eyes and answer…radhika gets tensed
precap
arjun lifts radhika in his arm and put her in his car…
seher
September 13, 11:54mmm!!!! Lve z in the air… ♡♡♡
Thena
September 13, 12:13hiiiiii dearrrrrriiiiiieeeesssss…..
thank God…just had been checking evry website & finally found u all…..happppiiiiieeeeee…..missed u badly…..
strawberry
September 14, 05:35Wow Deepa!!! U rock…a new show can be made on ur story…..that would be a great success……waiting for epi-15
Clara
September 14, 06:01Loved the episode dear. <3 🙂
seher
September 13, 10:31hyyy…kfar,anu,thena,riya,deep nd ol othrs…u guyz r goona post ua stories hr???
Abbz
September 13, 10:05Hey all …. am new here … am frm d dmy telly page … hi deepa n kfar .. waitin 4 ur stories eagerly …
Riya
September 13, 09:45Hiiiiiiiii
deepa
September 13, 09:48Hi riya….wer are our friends yaar….no one seem to use tis page except renu,u,kfar,strawberry,zara,mandy
dolly
September 13, 15:24Comment
dolly
September 13, 15:26Deepa u r really v good
kfar
September 13, 09:19Hey every option is closed guys on TU…should I update here the story?
Hi, thanks Kruti sure I will 😀
Deepa wer r our friends all?!?
thena, mandy, ireena,dipika, anu, renu, shub,anaya, tanya, ure, clara,zara,tasnim, savera, strawberry, seher,kanishka samiha, happy,abi, mitty, and all guys….shub i cant find the community in google+ yaar sab kahan par ho
deepa
September 13, 09:51Dont knw yaar….am too waiting for them
seher
September 13, 10:33hyy…@kfar..i ws waitin for ua story in tellyupdates bhabi ji ghr pe h…
bt evn thr cmnt bx z clsd
Kruti
September 13, 14:17Eagerly waiting for ur story… plzzz update
Clara
September 14, 05:57I’m here guys!! 🙂 Waiting for further updates from kfar,deepa,anu,and all
Clara
September 14, 05:58Btw…@kfar Can’t you update on the BGPH page? Am there too.
zara
September 13, 06:06awesome episode dear.. waiting for dance competition episode !! ardhika’s passionate uuuffff 🙂 🙂 mindblowing dear..
next episode update soon dear. thnx for updating 🙂 😉
deepa
September 13, 06:10Next epi vll b updated soon yaar….
unknown
September 13, 09:06I am also waiting deepa i think u will surely bring some romantic twist
deepa
September 13, 06:00Saveera,abbs,ure,mitty,strawberry
deepa
September 13, 05:51Renu,kfar,thena,mandy,tanya,anaya,natasha,ria,dipika,anu,mitty,ireena and my drs wru all?
deepa
September 13, 05:51Renu,kfar,thena,mandy,tanya,anaya,natasha,ria,dipika, wru guys
deepa
September 13, 05:47Epi 13
starts with radhika in classroom,lost in thoughtd,tittu s talking with misha “something is wrong with radhika….she s totally confused…..Misha: i too think t same…bcos i never saw her in this condition
tittu:lets find out
rocky comes there and inform them to come for computer class,as their chemistry mam s on leave today….
Tittu:hey jolly,v can bunk…
Rocky tells u cant bunk….attendance s compulsory….in case u bunk,ur internal mark will not b given….so dont wait ur time,come fast
all 1st yr enters t class,arjun s talking with neil….rads enters in and arjun fix his gaze on her,neil noticing arjun staring at radhika
radhika feels as if someone s touching her body by eyes and she sees arjun…
Scene2
radhika s seated behind arjun showing her back to him…arjun s completely lost by her presence,neil is seen noticing this.
Arjun stares her romantically,radhika feels his hot breath on her back and feels uncomfy class s going on both were lost in their own thoughts….class getover,they all leave.
Scene3
incanteen,tittu and misha are discussing abt ardhika,they plan something inorder to knw radhikas feeling
radhika s alone in class,thinking,y she is getting attracted to him very much,i hav to control my mind,i hav to concentrate on studies and nothingelse….i hav to stayaway from him,so that i wont get weird thoughts
preca
arjun gets restless thinking of radhika
seher
September 13, 10:38nce epi deepa..
i m happy ua cuntinueng ua story hre…
eagerly waitng for ua nxt epi… 🙂
strawberry
September 14, 03:33Wow….lovely
Clara
September 14, 05:56Loved it!! 🙂
zara
September 13, 04:31hey deepa can you post your story on this page also..??
waiting for next episode dear …
deepa
September 12, 23:05Hey guys……am here
unknown
September 13, 03:57Thanks deepa pls post ur episode 13 here
Dym(kfar)
September 12, 16:18Guys it closed our page in TU 🙁
unknown
September 12, 20:11Kfar can u pls continue ur story here and ask also deepa to come here
Kruti
September 13, 03:54Hi kfar…I hv been following ur story Drawn together in tellyupdates.. Ur writing skills r amazing.. Waiting eagerly for more updates. Do let us know as to wr u will post the story
strawberry
September 12, 08:54Love ardhika and nesam
unknown
September 12, 14:10Strawberry u might not know me i know u on tu can u ask kfar deepa
And oters to continue their mmz story hete through mail tu team my invitation msg there pls plspls
unknown
September 12, 14:14Strawberry u might not know me i know u on tu can u ask kfar deepa
And others to continue their mmz story here through mail tu team rejected my invitation msg there pls plspls
strawberry
September 12, 08:53I ❤️ Dym……waiting for dym2
seher
September 11, 12:54hyy…riya whr r u???